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Are there certain words that should be banned from use in poetry? The people at writeThis certainly think so, and I'm inclined to agree. And before you think I'm talking profanities or suchlike, just take a moment to peruse the list... and then think of all the amateurish poetry you've ever read that makes your skin crawl because it's so corny and cliché ridden.


words that shall be banned from poetry (an evolving list)

the following words in all of their forms are henceforth and forever banned from poetic usage:

1. slayer
2. dragon
3. forest
4. twilight
5. mist
6. slew (slay)
7. sword
8. tears
9. wicked
10. glimmer
11. quest
12. impassioned
13. vow
14. demon
15. unsheath
16. shadow
17. flame
18. unreal
19. abyss
20. soul
21. tear
22. longing
23. eternity
24. infinity
25. life
26. heaven
27. hell
28. broken
29. stung
30. love
31. sweetheart
32. clutching
33. devil
34. pain
35. shores
36. searing
37. golden
38. wings
39. thou
40. thee
41. nevermore
42. quoth
43. flutter
44. breeze
45. knight
46. Jennifer
47. passion
48. burn
49. soft
50. song
51. sky
52. earth
53. mystery
54. death
55. sift
56. obsession
57. ice
58. black
59. heartache
60. fire
61. fantasy
62. silhouette
63. eye
64. shimmer
65. confusion
66. scorn
67. heart
68. desire
69. awesome
70. loins
71. forest
72. road
73. wood
74. breathtaking
75. summer
76. travel
77. sex
78. poetry
79. surreal
80. spiritual
81. thou
82. beat
83. creative
84. cloud
85. flower
86. grass
87. leaf
88. mind
89. joy
90. world
91. death
92. sparkle
93. kindness
94. sepia
95. snow
96. crunch
97. flowing
98. pulsating

Acknowledgements to writeThis.com for kind permission to reproduce this list.
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Post by Louis P. Burns aka Lugh »

LMFAO Delph :P ...

It'll certainly seperate the wheat from the chaff within poetry circles. Might be fun writing a poem that only included words from that list though. I might give it a go, purely as an experiement in anarchic writing :wink: ...
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Post by Mike Daniels »

I'd add shard, soul, and remove song and sky from the list. And we all have words we tend to overuse which we should avoid whenever we can.

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Lugh wrote:I might give it a go, purely as an experiement in anarchic writing :wink: ...
Can one of you hit me a slap in the teeth and yell:-

W I S E

U P

L U G H

Y A

H A L F W I T
. . . ! ! !
at me.

Please?

Ta muchly :roll: ...
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Post by Mike Daniels »

give it go anyway - the challenge is to produce a piece of poetry that isn't clichéd to death, ie something fresh and genuine...
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Epiphany!

Post by icarusweeping »

How about this?

Instead of removing all the words from our vocabularies as suggested, why not run a competition where one must use all those words in the order listed? Good idea? Oh, I'm full of them, I tell you!

No more than 2000 words, mind.....

iccy :lol:
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Post by Catherine Edmunds »

It's been done, iccy. I won. :shock: Honest. Writethis.com ran the comp some months ago and I entered a set of three linked sonnets that pretty much used all the words, though not in the right order, and I actually beat all comers, and won a poetry book.

Here's my winning entry http://www.writethis.com/banned001.html
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Humph......

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You certainly know how to ruin a man's fun... I was joking. Humph....Now I'll have to go have a look, won't I?

Not in order? Sheesh....
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Post by Louis P. Burns aka Lugh »

I fell about laughing when I saw you guys had reanimated this thread :D ...

I've just read through the list once more and the challenge to write something utterly horrible, perhaps using every third word first. Then when I feel that task complete, every second and so on until every other word was used, looms ever nearer. I may also toss in the occasional expletive like; 'bastard/bastards', 'cunt/cunts' and 'fucker/fuckers', but that depends on where my humour levels are at on any given day.

You can argue with me about this if you like. I'll just laugh all the louder because I haven't written a damn thing. Yeah. That's it :idea: ... I'll create a literary conspiracy that 'really doesn't exist.'

Christ I'm good.

Right, you lot carry on. I'm just off to treat myself to a sandwich for being so clever :P ...
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Post by Louis P. Burns aka Lugh »

Should the word; F'cunllockstard be banned before it's discovered?
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Post by Catherine Edmunds »

Quite probably. :shock:
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(chuckles)
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Ah, you're a joker, Delph!

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I know that your banned list of words is in that infamous English humour... I'm almost laughing!

I mean, if you were serious, you'd have banned troglodyte already. Also zabaglione, Zarathrustrian, neanderthal, yo yo and yttrium.
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Post by Louis P. Burns aka Lugh »

What about the words Margaret and Thatcher, Tony and Blair, Gordon and Brown when used together? Not only should they be banned. They should be burned. Them and George W. Bush of course...

Here's a peace offering bro;-

viewforum.php?f=60

Sláinte
^ Cheers

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Post by icarusweeping »

OK, thanks, Lugh. I shall use it gently. I did try to respond to your PM but apparently the administrator has 'turned me off.'

Cheers, John

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