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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 11:42 am
by Louis P. Burns aka Lugh
delph_ambi wrote:I would go for all lower case, but include apostrophes to show the missing letters in 'olland and 'arrods.
This poem's fun, Lugh. Makes me smile each time I read it
Nice one Delph
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Knowing it brings on a smile is a great compliment mate. Thanks
Right. Here goes:-
two gossips in a café
By Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 2005 / 2006. All Rights Reserved.
Editor - Catherine Edmunds.- look at him
posing git
white cotton shirts
and he always sits
at that table
i knew him
way back when
he was nobody
but even then
he ate lobster
he drank wine
fierce amounts
water these days
and by all accounts
only salads
out-bloody-rageous
a rock star now
won't even see us
and that vicious cow he's
hooked up with
she's a scream
thin as a rake
i reckon she's out
for all she can take
more coffee kate?
yeah. why not?
I've a half day
order more gateau
it's my turn to pay
nice here innit?
too right, luv
check out his butt
a weekend with him
i'd soon lose this gut
shssssh. here they come
hi michael
hi mary-jean
your hair was gorgeous
in 'she' magazine.
very pretty...
new band mike?
your life's all go
thought you were brilliant
on Jools 'olland's show
ooooh. he's luverly.
who?
oh jools
yeah really nice bloke.
i met him in 'arrods
but he never spoke
bye michael...
stuck up brats
youth of today
i think she's a front
and he's really gay
i thought that too
happy though?
Yeah, i suppose.
right. you get the waiter.
i'll powder me nose...
same time next week?
Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 12:05 pm
by Catherine Edmunds
Ha... you missed two. There's still a capital J and Y lurking in there Lugh. Happy proofreading...
Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 12:15 pm
by Louis P. Burns aka Lugh
delph_ambi wrote:Ha... you missed two. There's still a capital J and Y lurking in there Lugh. Happy proofreading...
LOL & Oooops
Right. Here goes (again)
two gossips in a café
By Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 2005 / 2006. All Rights Reserved.
Editor - Catherine Edmunds.- look at him
posing git
white cotton shirts
and he always sits
at that table
i knew him
way back when
he was nobody
but even then
he ate lobster
he drank wine
fierce amounts
water these days
and by all accounts
only salads
out-bloody-rageous
a rock star now
won't even see us
and that vicious cow he's
hooked up with
she's a scream
thin as a rake
i reckon she's out
for all she can take
more coffee kate?
yeah. why not?
i've a half day
order more gateau
it's my turn to pay
nice here innit?
too right, luv
check out his butt
a weekend with him
i'd soon lose this gut
shssssh. here they come
hi michael
hi mary-jean
your hair was gorgeous
in 'she' magazine.
very pretty...
new band mike?
your life's all go
thought you were brilliant
on jools 'olland's show
ooooh. he's luverly.
who?
oh jools
yeah really nice bloke.
i met him in 'arrods
but he never spoke
bye michael...
stuck up brats
youth of today
i think she's a front
and he's really gay
i thought that too
happy though?
yeah, i suppose.
right. you get the waiter.
i'll powder me nose...
same time next week?
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This has been a fun experience Delph.
Nice one mate
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