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Click here to read The Next Science by Sprinkles.

I think it's a magnificent and timely poem and a thought inspiring piece ...

Nice delivery Sprinkles ...

If you feel like commenting on the piece. Can you please do so here Sprinkles? Likewise to all other members.

I will now create pages for all contributing poets and writers. Then at a later date, compile them to collection on themes that we can all add to...

Thanks and once again;-

Sprinkles

Nice delivery

Excellent piece mate, I look forward to seeing future work by you

i deleted most of my answers but thank you all darlings

I like this
it is paranoid and pessemistic
Sounded like the ramblings of a schizophrenic
East Berlin Athlete circa 1976

you should submit it to Ireland's Own
or the Readers Digest
they will be confused

Tell me Sprinkles are you a sponge or a stone?

i like to think of myself as a sponge for i am forever fleecing large companies from argos to abbey..........im off to the pawn shop catch you later you big sack of blood and mucus

Great piece of writing. Gripping (though the last few lines veer perilously close to cliché -- maybe there's some way to keep the startling originality going right to the end). Spieces should be species, but that was the only typo I noticed.