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Nice one Argie ...

Good to see you back here mate.

Thanks for sharing this wonderful work. It might need a few tweaks to correct grammar in the English translation, but please don't take that as a criticism. If you want, I will help you...

This is... exceptional. I notice you've asked for some 'good-hearted lady' to sort out your English, so I'll take that as an invitation. I'll make a start tomorrow, and post my thoughts in this thread.
Thank you for putting it in the Library; the proper place for all such works.

Hi Argie

I see you have posted a second message into your section of the Sensitize Library, but it requests feedback from other members. The whole aim of the Library is that each active member like you, Delph, Danimik, Alan, Kate, Martha, Dave and me have a place where we can dispay whatever work we wish to but without other posters messaging.

If you want feedback from other members, can you please post a message to here in the General Messages section that links to your work?

Cheers mate ...

Why have I got such an enormous avatar compared to everyone else? Not that that's got anything to do with the price of fish... just wondered. Maybe I'm just more important

Anyway. I was going to post a crit of Argie's "To Maria Molinara" here, but it's the wrong place, so I'll hop over to 'poetry' and do it here.

Hi Delph,

I haven't got a clue why your picture is bigger, unless it was originally bigger as a photograph and is now fitting itself to whatever limits these kinds of forums have set. Then of course, there is the fact that you're more important ...

Did anyone else experience that mess on broadband servers yesterday? I couldn't get online at all from about 5.30pm. T'was a nightmare...