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Remembrance & Writing Opposed To War.

Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 11:30 am
by Louis P. Burns aka Lugh
It's the 11th November, 2006. Remembrance Day and a chance to reflect on all the losses people experience because of war. If members of Sensitize wish to offer their own writing on the tragedies of war, or remember friends and loved ones who have died or been injured in conflicts, then please post to this thread.

I will get the ball rolling with an old poem of mine called Terminal:-

Terminal. By Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 1987 / 2002.

Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 11:35 am
by Louis P. Burns aka Lugh
terminal
By Louis P. Burns aka Lugh © 1987 / 2002. All Rights Reserved.
  • standing in the airport
    feeling lost and alone
    watching people wait for hours
    to use a telephone
    a policeman tells the broken-hearted
    there's nothing he can do
    I have a cup of coffee
    the clock shows quarter-to

    you don't know what it did to me
    when you had to go away
    all I could do was hope
    that you'd be back again
    someday

    the rain is falling heavy
    I press my face into the glass
    and try to visualise your face
    at sometime in the past
    they said you died a hero's death
    out on the frontline
    that you climbed the ranks of bravery
    when you lay down on a mine

    well, all I feel is nausea
    and I wish that I could scream
    I wish that I could pinch myself
    and wake up from this dream
    but, this is not imagined
    this is very, very, real.
    I can't help thinking that you
    got the shit end of the deal

    you don't know what it did to me
    when you had to go away
    all I could do was hope
    that you'd be back again
    someday.

    standing on the tarmac
    my heart sinks like a stone
    as they take your body off the plane
    you have finally
    come home...
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 1:37 pm
by Mike Daniels
Reasons To Be Cheerful

Bliss -
an edge of rain against fresh mown grass
and the world dilutes.

Faded banners fling threads against the air,
against the anthems we sang
to bugle calls, and the whisper of steam
that washed station platforms.

I pick a poppy - just one -
to blaze against the sun
in phantom anger.
I heard your regrets
as you feed the chambers
with the snicking of steel.

Will there be more graveyards
like these, I wonder,
to stiffen November breezes?

Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 2:56 pm
by Louis P. Burns aka Lugh
Thanks Mike :) ...