The Poem
Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 12:49 pm
The Poem
Does it matter that the poet
presents an image;
two oystercatchers in synchronised flight
around a narrow inlet,
the beating of their wings harmonised
to the hiss of the waves on sand
and the slap of the sea on the shore.
He might have chosen instead;
two elderly lovers holding hands
as they walk their twilight lane
their smiles fleshing out
the fall of the land
given over to archaeology.
Would this meaning have more resonance?
In truth, he saw the fusion of the stars
that brightened the night.
He heard the Hallé and The Free Trade Hall
resonate to ‘The Young Person’s Guide’
and ennui gave way
to a prickling of the hair on his arms.
He saw a gathering
of daisies on the lawn.
He smelled the honeysuckle
that clung to the kitchen wall,
tight as a coal mine.
He tasted the ozone on the sea
and candyfloss and holidays.
He saw a boy with bloodied knee,
his tears stroked away
by a mother’s soft words,
and he fell in love
with the moment and the image
and all the language he heard them embrace.
Does it matter that the poet
presents an image;
two oystercatchers in synchronised flight
around a narrow inlet,
the beating of their wings harmonised
to the hiss of the waves on sand
and the slap of the sea on the shore.
He might have chosen instead;
two elderly lovers holding hands
as they walk their twilight lane
their smiles fleshing out
the fall of the land
given over to archaeology.
Would this meaning have more resonance?
In truth, he saw the fusion of the stars
that brightened the night.
He heard the Hallé and The Free Trade Hall
resonate to ‘The Young Person’s Guide’
and ennui gave way
to a prickling of the hair on his arms.
He saw a gathering
of daisies on the lawn.
He smelled the honeysuckle
that clung to the kitchen wall,
tight as a coal mine.
He tasted the ozone on the sea
and candyfloss and holidays.
He saw a boy with bloodied knee,
his tears stroked away
by a mother’s soft words,
and he fell in love
with the moment and the image
and all the language he heard them embrace.