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HEAD IN THE CLOUDS

Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2007 6:31 pm
by Catherine Edmunds
HEAD IN THE CLOUDS

eric was fashionably dressed
in bumptious cumulo nimbus

fleur didn't know what to do
cirrus was so last year

should she try – did she dare
wear altostratus in white?

Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2007 6:19 pm
by Louis P. Burns aka Lugh
Hi Delph :)

Good to see you posting again.

This poem is simply wonderful. It's got comedy and fine drama in it. I also like that it teaches readers who may be inclined to research, about different cloud formations / structures.

Well played :D ...

Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2007 10:33 pm
by Catherine Edmunds
Thanks Lugh. Glad you liked the poem. :)

I'll post some more bits and pieces in a while, but am going to be computerless from tomorrow. Back in a week or so, hopefully.

Cheers,

Delph.

Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2007 10:41 pm
by Louis P. Burns aka Lugh
Nice one buddy :)

Sozzles to hear you're gonna be computerless. That's always a pain.

Incidently, the old e-zine online thingummybob is really taking shape now. We've more or less completed the Healing Herbs project and can now focus more on other aspects of the website. Will keep you, Mike and Argie updated by email or messages on here. This link will take you to our homepage which has gone through a bit of a makeover

http://www.upstaterenegadeproductions.com/

Not all the pages are up yet but we're getting there...

Peace and all best wishes Delph :) ...